nice work i gotta say.....every had some funny ass disses.....and the 13th Disciple was a nice surprise at the end....u all stay on topic...had nice structures...funny ass lines.....so here....i'ma quote the best line from EACH emcee....
Quote:
From Origin:
The agents still shine..even tho we merk this bitch in shades
Damn..ya styles so elementry..its got us feelin twice our age
Ya recs addin ya battles..hard times show it equals ya wack
Aragorn gettin in my hair..only reason imma take off my hat
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^^haha...elementary line was tight.....hair line was creative...u lacked in vocab and multis though...nice work overall..
Quote:
From -Technician-:
Speak alotta shit you no vet, 9 and 9 i already hit your chest
I drag queens in'a game'a chess, to show you the way you dress,
You should just slap crap, cause frankly faggot ya shits whack
I Usually obliterate spines, but for you let's just say i cut back
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^^lol....even though chess lines are played...i gotta say that's possibly the best way to put it....nice work on wordplay.....even though u recycled the fan base line....u did a good job....but u also lacked in vocab...but u had a tad of multis....
Quote:
From ...::ËMËRGË::...:
Quit it...got no chance...in the way of my train of thought
Aragorns a deer caught in headlights...cross haired & shot
You're under-mined cole n find nothing but dicks intwined* (colon find)
I wine & dine serving you line for line yet you don't mind
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^^lmao...colon line was tight.....and deer line was good...u had some nice metas throughout ur verse....and good multis, flow, vocab, and structure......i think u topped 2nd in this collab next to 13th...good job i gotta say...
Quote:
From Speek.E.Z.:
Spit Against The Agents, We Make This Unknown Famous..
Let You Win Your First Category, And Title It Lameness..
Compare Us To HB Pencil, The Way We Pumping Lead..
Because If Aragorn Keeps It Up We'll Leave Him Dead..
I'll Give You A Chance And Leave This Line As Filler..
You're Like A Whore We Fuck You Up Then Bill Her..
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^^whore line was tight....category line was pretty good....u had some good lines...but no real stand out hits....but u did have multis, structure, and flow....good work from u duke
Quote:
From EyE QuE:
I got so many personals on you...I pmed everybody aragorn talks ta
Hey i'm glad you got a crew now, even if it is just an artificial family
You already knew this, but you never stood a chance, like one hand poker gambling
I called you out weeks ago, and you still din't hit me up with a positive response
Show some respect?? Get some hair on your chest...ur more used up then Arial fonts
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^^good work with the personals...i think u had the best personals in this collab...u had a good vocab....a nice flow...ur structure was kinda...bleh....u had pretty good metas....and nice disses.....good job man...
Quote:
From 13th Disciple:
Aragorn?!...u fallin victim to the power,fake ass Lord Of The Ring...
...ur late wit ur Blockbuster tape cuz u aint Return Of The King....
^ur sig...now heres the thing...Realist tellin me u talkin some shit..
...callin Regime overrated...when ur rating status doesn't exist...
bitch...now the Disciple has to step in & exorcise of ur demon...
...leavin u fucked...but...ur not even worth the waste of my semen
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^^lol...looks to me like 13th still got text down...u had some funny disses...a kinda weak vocab....good flow....nice metas....good personals....a pretty good structure....overall i think u were the best read in this collab....good job...
BREAKDOWN (who won best in what category)
Structure - Origin & Speek.E.Z.
Vocab - EyE QuE & ...::ËMËRGË::...
Punches - 13th Disciple & ...::ËMËRGË::...
Personals - EyE QuE & 13th Disciple
Flow - EyE QuE, -Technician-, Origin, Speek.E.Z., & 13th Disciple
Consistency - All
Multis - ...::ËMËRGË::... & -Technician-
Overall - u all did a great job.....as u can see ...::ËMËRGË::... & 13th were the top two in my opinion in this collab......u all threw nice punches and disses.....nice metas....good flows and vocab....the only thing u lacked in a majority was multis and vocabulary...good work from u all though
Rating:
9/10
peace
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