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Old 12-17-03, 02:46 PM   #16
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Walter's about to ruin ure rec, go ahead beg and plead
Truth is youve elevated.....cuz u got rejected from elite!

Nice opener.. not played.. First line was type filler but the second made up for it... 8/10

Ure up against de best, confess comparitively your wack
U hit hard at the chest...when uve got an asthma attack

Not bad.. Although i've seen this line a couple times.. Not horribly played but somewhat played.. 7/10

And you can cook up sum dope shit...now I'll let you try
Get ure ass in the kitchen technician, make me sum pie!

Weak punch.. Not feeling this one.. 5/10

Denied from LLL, dis kid needs to brush up his alphabet
shit, the only time ure 1 step ahead of me....is on a cliff!

Flowed aweful.. Weak punch.. Okay but Played meta..5/10

I'd diss ure crew 2, but no one would accept you dawg
and Id say you fell off, but son........you were never on!

Dope closer nice hard punch.. 8/10

33/50

Technician

His sig says "We're Way Too Witty", cuz bitches play dood shitty
Even If ya punches hit me, i'm fine u swing wit da paws of'a kitty

Weak opener.. Refrain from using dood and bitches.. 5/10

8-2? I'm not hatin' you, we talkin' newbs and you raped a few
Breakin through, the novice rapist Rb will always make of you

Great flow.. But that's about the only good thing in this line.. 6/10

Wish you could Make "The View", tha W i'll hafta take from dood
You spit tight wen you ate some glue, from 1-10 you rate a two

You can tell you dug on this one.. weak punch.. okay meta but played... 5/10

Walter Wall.....You lie gay talkin shit while I just stand straight
Blowin' Army Guards is the only way you'll establish a fan base

Nice Punch.. Good meta.. Nice multi.. 8/10

You should fuck wit dictionaries ta learn ta play wit ya words
Cuz you couldn't spit sick if you had a mouth full'a milk curds

Played, Played, and more Played.. 6/10

30/50

Walter Wall Wins.
Nice verse Walter.
Keep at it Technician.
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