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Old 12-17-03, 05:21 PM   #3
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i think this could use some work...like on ya multis, but as it is its ok.....some decent vocab n flow seemed good for the most....

who is da openent runnin up against/
Da one u see ma back turned to who's up against da fence/

^^thought hte flow fell here though....but overall not bad...keep at it...pZ....
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