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Old 12-17-03, 05:44 PM   #13
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Dont really know both of ya'll cats but Deacon's vote dint look too clever....
anyways
Mentill-you had some really nice concepts etc but they really dint hit that hard..you obviously can spit heat but it looked effortless in this battle and you dint come hard enuf..

Celest-Looked a bit scripted but you did have some nice wordplay and your flow and structure was well kept.

BREAKDOWN---
Punches-Tie
Structure-C
Flow-C
Enjoyment-Mentill
Metas-C
Effort-C
Sustainment-C
Overall-C
Nice battle but Effort and Metas took it for me

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ..SEEN AS THO I HIT THIS UP PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99336
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