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Originally posted by Dez
Ehh..
Work to drop the whole 'gangster' ordeal. It is not fun to read or listen to. Expand your vocab some, youll find that it helps to increase the overall appeal of your verses. And last but not least, DONT RAP ABOUT GUNS.
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fucking hypocrit
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Originally posted by Dez
HERE MA' GAT, LEAVE EM BLOODY AND FULL OF HOLES
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you n pot1ent some wack rappers
hope u duel ride my nuts, double sweatage!!
must be fetish, cuhz every time i come on i see u 2 heads' tryin to diss a textee
Must be on some Wack-tacy(exctacy), cuhz u seein colors-after this diss
You come online and talk hard-core,but ur just retarded
Bomb-barted, wit lines into ur chest - im nameless/crewless yet still the best
your added to the shook-list,your as embarassed as a nerd gettin booked-bitch
get off DEZ nuts, PLEASE-SHUCKS i need some toliet paper to whipe off the sweat
he's a cock-blocker, and im a glock-stocker, so im full of lead
your a toliet, cuz u full of SHIT, full of it, bitch, get off this dick
www.GayPorn.com, i saw you reppin' the tight shirt crew
in the winter he snuggles wit is dad to stay warm!! lookin small like the ernie n burt, he even got the dew too!!
Fuck u n the whole 'word perfect crew', buncha faggots BOO
you'd get kicked of the stage, if u read of a real MC's shit
get kicked in the clit, got this shit clicked bitch
only cocks u pumped (shotgun) is the penis
pote1ent, you suck DEZ ur wack - bitch i mean this