4 real i liked this piece tho short and simple it was nice..may be just me but i saw alot of symbolization in here maybe struggling with your innerself not sure thats just the way i perceived it..keep this up..

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my head is clouded with senseless doubt
but this seems to be my only escape route
so ill slither my way across the ground
to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
~*~YOU LIVE YOU LEARN~*~