i like the way the 1st person put it an emotional dead end took the words right out my mouth...it does seem as tho its that way..and maybe the poem ended like that because you yourself moved on leaving those hurtful feelings behind? not too sure..just the way im taking it..
the poem itself was great i really liked your scheme for some reason it wasnt quite random but wasnt much patterned either
all in all im luvin it...keep this up..

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my head is clouded with senseless doubt
but this seems to be my only escape route
so ill slither my way across the ground
to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
~*~YOU LIVE YOU LEARN~*~