Well dawg i'm gonna break dis shit down like dis for u, alright homie.

STRENGTHS
nice metaphors, flow, and overall creativity dawg.


WEAKNESSES
you need to leave at least 3 links or else your thread will be of course deleted, anyway you got jus about everything down pat jus use MULTIS and try not putting backslashes at da end of your rhymes.





!!!!!!!TIGHT FLOW MAN, KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!

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*Nashville city*