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Old 12-17-03, 10:41 PM   #6
Tha Duce
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Ok this is the break down

Joe bird-
sounds flat as hell. like the vocals are on the beat, and to low and crapy mic or way over compressed not sure probly crapy mic.
Thou I can understand the lyrics and hear them sum what clearly. pritty good Lyrics, nothing to complain about. Off beat at times Like the production was rushed and not cleaned up. so take your time dawg next time. Not much in change ups. its just flat all the way thou. You should try to add changes or a Hook or somthing. Be Creative in this area, IM sure you put some decent time into lyrics. but if your production is just same all the way thou people will loose intrest. ..... OK I would give this a 5 out of 10....

The Prophett 77-
Ok you have a big problem wit production too, You have mad cliping dawg. and half the time its realy hard to under stand you or hear you. The flow was a touch better then Joe BIrd. and on your vocals you have a deep ass tweeked version of your voice and higher pitch version. and when there going togeter it sounds like crap. It almost sounds like you have the beat so High its to cover up your sub par lyircs. dont know since I cant hear half of them. but what I heard was good just like Joe Bird. I would give this a 4.5 out of 10

OK this was a close one Since I could Hear Joe Bird better and was cleaner even thou it was flat sounding big time. It was more understandable. bolth beat each other in diffrent areas but I think tha bird got this one barly...that is my take..... No Hate

Vote Joe Bird
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