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Old 12-17-03, 10:56 PM   #21
KillerKrazy
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Aight, this was an aight battle:

Favorite lines:

"skin re(a)d like a book have you take a second look still steal-in like a crook then your caught/"
-ana
"you are like a unicycle, you could never handle bars/
if you did, you would end up with lyracil scars/"
-Hand

i thought that anaconda's verse had a better flow, but a lot of the rhymes in your verse didn't mean anything and seemed like they were just added to produce inner rhymes or to improve your rhyme scheme!! Your punches were allright and i liked the way you worded a few of them!! Handcuffs verse was set out a lot better (structured) and i liked a few of your punches!! You had a worse flow but that was the only category i felt you lost in this battle (anaconda had some wordplay too)!! Overall i think this was an aight battle but i got to go with Handcuff on this one (just try and improve your flow and you'll be real tight, prolly with multis)!!

VOTE: Handcuff