ight... well props to start off...

i know it wasn't your best shit... but hell...it was hot
i like how u don't try n overwhelm with vocab.. nice n simple
the imagry was done well... i liked how this was done...
some catchy stuff in this...everything seemed worded good n all


There is no more hesitation in my decisions
No more beads of perspiration in my vision

^that was nice...

Careers sighted, this is more than just a lame habit
It’s drastic how much rapping can make me an addict

^both showed some good imagry...and depth

props