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Old 12-18-03, 12:27 AM   #3
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umm I wasnt really Feelin It Flow Wuz Very Choppy At Times It Was Hard To Get It......U Could Have Extended Ya Bars A bit More......Too Simple Add Some Wordplay , Multis n Some Vocab (U Kno Big Words LOL Newb)but practice some more n drop Sumthin Else
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