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Old 12-18-03, 04:21 AM   #6
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Nice little battle..Good contrasts here..heres how it is

Aisle 5- First bar set a great tone..I loved that bar. Very nicely worded and the punch hit nice w/ the sarcasm. Then you let a downfall. You dint have the consistency. You had some good concepts but dint use them to full affect.

Bribe- Bribe you had sustainment all the way thru your verse. The punches weren't knockout but the fact is you hit w/ every line. Thats what won this battle for you. The sustainment was greater than Aisles.

Breakdown---
punches-Jus Bribe
sustainment-Bribe
Metas-Tie
Flow-Both
Structure-Both
Enjoyment-Both
Fav Bar-Aisle
Personals-Tie
Overall-Bribe

Once again props to both peace
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