..terror walks again..
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IP:
eh, being postive pretty even / ok battle
Dat Nucca: ya came wit nonstop personals, but ya structure and the fact half of ya punches didnt connect at all. i think 1 proof read would helped ya out.
punch 2ur more pussy then 'inside of' porn flicks
^ see what i mean
Frito: must say thats a odd ball spitten name, but 2 each their own. ya had better structure more solid flow, but 8 of the 10 punches were beyond blah. after ya 1st 4 barz i almost quit readin ya verse thinkin wtf dumb just reached dumber. then i saw punch 7 and 8 and i chuckled after i read em. kinda redundent punch,
but thats all it took
vote - frito
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