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Old 12-18-03, 11:25 AM   #14
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Kautiouse....what u think is wordplay isn't-same with canuck on his first line......

I read thru an felt canuck's verse was very simplistic filled wit childish threats....which i guess u could categorize as punches....

Kautiouse kept quoting "things"....for what reason I dont know....but other than that it had sum decent flow and some O.K. met4's......

to me this is difficult for me to decide......
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..............well....Ima have to go with canuck......as simplistic as it was...it seemed to me that he was geared more torwards a battle verse.....kautiouse....u'r alot better than what u shown here....try an stay on base a lil bit more though...u got all caught up in your wordplay......

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