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Old 12-18-03, 11:28 AM   #9
Tobias Arnold
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Very one sided from where I sit. Ben was all over him with nice wordplay, good flow, a better rhyme scheme, and punches that were witty and hard. Oc's was a very simple rhyme in a bad paragraph format. Hurt the flow alot. What also hurt was that alot of his stuff didn't make alot of sense. The 'match' and 'calculator' lines were like, huh? There were a few more, but I won't list everything that was wrong with his verse. OC just needs to work alot harder on his rhymes, incorporate wordplay, and be more creative with his vocab. That will help produce better shots than the weak display I saw here. Please vote on my battle in return now. Thank you! Tobias vs. K