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Old 12-18-03, 11:55 AM   #4
Freeman
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opener: K...

tobias' opener didnt rhyme....

'K's a dumbass, profile says he's rockin tha West Coast.
But ya comin outta England, that's east, didn't ya know?'

closer: K
punches; Tie
structure: Tie
wordplay: Tie
vocab: K - used a wider variety of words
overall: K

Tobias....first 4 lines didnt rhyme, did they?!?!?!

laterz