Sup G?

Nice flow...but u need to increase your wordplay. Try to use some metaphors too.

My best lines were: -

"rob this nigga, fuckin snitch,
treat his ass, just like a bitch"

- We all hate snitches. I like the humour - Funny shit!

"daddy's lil girl, she gonna get it to,
she gonna know, who killed you"

- Nice expression of anger.

Tash Shyne.