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im tryin to rite betta so i started countin sylabbles so id have betta flow
gimme some criticism | belabor is to attack with blows and NWA is a 1988 rap group that is a classic and they had a song called fuck tha police
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i spit shit that you cant even comprehend // 10
you spit back but this battles without-a-end // 11
ya fucked up youll be the next victim on ER // 11
youll come out looking like some used cigar // 10
"doctor there ain't sposed to be no amputation" // 11
pray quick here comes your termination // 10
i lyrically stabbed u in the heart // 10
your arteries jarred ur gushin blood on my jeans // 12
ambulance gets there ur called dead at the scene // 11
i get arrested cuz my lyrics are so raw // 11
tried to handcuff me so i broke his jaw // 10
ran from the crime scene a fugitive of the law // 12
i stole a car and ran over the neighbor // 11
watch out bitches im known to belabor // 10
ill kill any old hag that does wrong to me // 11
gimme back my mercedes it belongs to me // 12
[chorus] 2x
im-a fugitive of the law //8
peopz like my shit cuz its raw // 7
so back the fuck up krines comin thru // 9
dont get outta ma-way ill kill u // 8
cuz im-a motha fuckin fugitive // 10
im headed for the border guns gallore // 10
just now ordered them all by mail order // 10
pop the ak out the side window watch out // 11
crash the car roll on the ground its a shoot out // 11
sqeeze-da-trigger till its totally depleted // 12
give-it-up pigs i cant be defeated // 10
they think why the hell not and call in the swat // 11
suddenly i burst up im another tupac // 12
i yell out like NWA "fuck tha police" // 11
keep fightin till there numbers greatly decrease // 11
fuck peace i wont stop till they start to cease // 10
they launch heat seaking missiles stop tha pistols // 11
im gone but not to heaven im goin to hell // 12
they pounded me down in there like a rusty nail // 12
[chorus] 4x
im-a-MOTHA FUCKIN fugitive of the FUCKIN law
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