Interesting little rhyme...

Pretty simplistic, was much better in the first 6 lines.

Something fell apart after that and you got kinda silly and went for shock value.

But, you used some funny Simpson's references which helped with your imagery.

Overall, eh.

But a 5.25/10 Holiday eh.

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