You had some good flow here...
The syllable counting did you aight.

But your content was pretty weak and herbish.

Thug? Bangin? Whatever...

Ya think we ain't heard this before?

So-so rhyme scheme, ok imagery, some good vocab...

All around, 5.75/10

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