Yo ima give you some advice this forum open mic is for critism if you don't want critism you need to post in poetical scriptures. this pz was wack i wasn't feelin it. You talk about fucking grade school in somethin that was about comin off the block with the only thing going for you is a wicked free flow and over coming fucking stage fright. so the next time some one gives you critism take it because everyone needs to elevate i know i do and others ill admit the same thing. you need to calm ur 17 yr old ass down u erd pz

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish