opener:wordplay
wordplay:tie
punches:word (exception your punches were too played)
personals:word
flow:exception
structure:exception
vocab:tie
multis:tie
overall:wordplay...both verses were okay, exception you have good flow and structure but your punches were kinda weak and you didn't use that many personals....
closer:word

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