I Am The Light
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IP:
I think this was forsure a nice piece.....There were a couple things that could have been possibly replaced, but this was nice...I think it brings a good point about the anatomy of a man...The structure was good rhyme scheme was on target overall nice read...
keep it up kid...ooooooooooooo
woot woot!
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