BREAKDOWN---
165 days thats a bit steep lol
Punches-Ape
Wordplay-None..work on it Ape
Personals-Ape
Enjoyment-Both
Structure-Ape
Flow-Ape
Metas-Ape
Overall-Ape
Props to both...not bad at all..
Ape well done for removing bolds etc..
your lines arent as stretched either pz
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8769#post998769