umm this was nice..it was straight to the point strictly displayin ya feelings i liked it..maybe could be elevated on a few things but ima newbie so i dont wanna be deliverin suggestions i dont own.. i did like it and maybe you should let this girl know i been in this sitch and she could feel like that as well..well holla atcha lata keep it up mann..

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my head is clouded with senseless doubt
but this seems to be my only escape route
so ill slither my way across the ground
to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
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