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Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
From: Cottage Grove, Oregon |
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IP:
I agree with Da Nfamous.
This wasn't just simple, it was weak. And overplayed. People write scheiße like this all time. Hell, even I've been guilty of writing a peice like this.
Thing is you gotta start writing from as a unique form as you can. And there are so many possibilitys. Open up and the words will work with you.
Writing, especially poetry, is one of the most dangerous things a person can do. Because all the good poetry involves showing a peice of yourself to other people which you'd rather keep hidden.
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