yo man this was alright....ya Structure was alright But i could Use some Work but structure isn't every thing in Open mics...ya Flow was quit Nice man not much Wrong with It........ya Wordplay and ya Vocab was Pretty good and made the Image betta...so this was a nice Piece good to read.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99801
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97934
can ya Hit them up for me they are my Latest Open Mics....thanks P.€.a.c.€.