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yo this is my first time goin with out writing ne thing down so i dont expect it to be good i just want to see what i can do

yo it dont matta what i choose
when i spit it i kno ur gonna loose

you cant beat me im the king
ill take out what eva rhyme u bring

see this is what i do for a livin
this talent isnt just given

you take too long to say what u got to say
its time for me to serve u my rhyme on ya dinner tray

when i spit it i just keep on goin
my rhymes are flowin like a river u freeze and shiver

when i drop this shit its a nuclear bomb
dont talk shit ur 36 still livin wit ur mom

ne one kno the hiemlich cuz he started to choke
spent all his money to face me, now he's broke


plz tell me what ya think