^ssshhhh....this forum is mean't to help people...!!^

You have a 2-2 record..whats really wrong with that...as far as i can see you have ability to use wordplay...you just need to expand your vocab (not much though)..bars like:

nobody noes or care bout wat u spit/
cuz we kno ur mouth like kotex...EVERY SIZE FITS/..

cuz all u good 4 is servin kandy in slurpies/
U like Apu's twin brother sayin "Enjoy The Beef Jerky"/....

are dope, there not immaculate but there a step in the right direction....just keep at it... you'll improve with practise.