pretty good, but it is more of a freestyle then an om. this is pretty much u telling the worlds problems and shit and how u see them. some of the rhymes didnt really rhyme lol but none the less made sense. it was pretty good but i say u should make it a little longer and put some more emotion into it. dig deep down and stuff and find wut the hell is really bugging u.

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