Wow, this is the whackest battle I have seen in a while, both of your structures made it seem like either drop was going to be workt the read, but ransum..you just filled your shit with uncreative and corny ass shit...sorry man..just none of it hit hard..and it seemed all of your "wordplay" was really forced and shouldnt even be called wordplay. Just don't think it was that "EZ" in the long run.

But as for AB, your shit was terrible as well. No hate at all, but your lines were so difficult to read, you misspelled and used wrong gramma and u could tell there should of been a word or to in a line..but u just left it out.....the way you say "and" at the beginning of every line sort of gets this repitition that you dont want because it creates a flow that aggrivates the reader, and then u pulled some bullshit vocabulary out of your "ass" and put it in your "shitty" verse. Yeah you had vocab but your punches were not even punches..although a couple of ur punches looked as if they were going to hit....but they didnt ...at all.....

but my vote has to go to RanSum, reason being is becuz he wasn't as consistantly whack. He had a couple of almost decent concepts...although he butchered them to death, they were still there none the less.

v/Ransum.

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