jae, you tried to impress with your vocab, but your punches were weak, your wordplay wasn't the best, an you had hardly, if not any attempts at personals.
you need to make your punches, direct an hard hitting!!

thing, yours wasnt the best, but your punches hit, they were consistant, wordplay wasn't too bad, you had a good verse, but it was still weak, you gotta elevate, an make your punches hit a little harder!!

vote thing,
better verse!!

plz try to hit up both battles in my sig!! thanks

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