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Old 11-09-06, 04:11 PM   #6
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listening!

..i aint feeling the beat but it fitted the topic and lyrics!...


prah had an ok flow not fluent on the beat but on point! its similar to ur flow on that 'i see' track...meh w/e,i can tell u didnt mix this right?...i liked your lyrics,u had some nice wordplay there...the 1 i caught was the mammasita line...cool!your delivery is so so..idk if its cool or not..its like in the middle...you had the right presence on this mayne..cos of how u came in i actually stayed to listen cos idk aint feeling the beat!... umm..nothing else to say on you!

A ..well u sounded too close to the mic..your p's were a lil too hard yo...my speakers vibrated a lil ..but ur flows were cool..had several switched and yeah they ok!...umm lyrics were cool...u had some nice wordplay..the 1 i caught was the ocean line!..you definitely had the right emotion on this with that voice whatelse wud 1 expect?!?!....ummm thats all!

hook is catchy and quite cool!.d-d-d-d-d-damn!...yup it was ok!


this track was very much decent and nice just that it aint my taste!


y'all keep it up tho!
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