To check the flow, I flowed those verses to a beat. 1st verse, flow is nice.. real consistent. Fell off once or twice. 2nd verse, started out dope with the flow.. then the change ups got kind of choppy in the middle. But yeah.. flow was pretty good for both.

The lyrics were nice I reckon. Shit got the message accross real well... nice vocab.. nothing seemed forced or anything. dope.

what else do i need to talk about?.... err.. fuck structure. I think thats about it.

but yo, good stuff.
id give it like.. 8 or 9 outta 10.

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