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Old 02-10-06, 11:44 AM   #12
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like everyon else has said the multis were decent... there were parts of this that were proorly worded though, kinda through the flow off in those parts... lyrically you got your message across... the hook isn't really a banger... overall this was a decent track though postin' ya verses centered make ya structure look on point... it's still clearly off... other than that... keep doing ya thing... 1
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