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Old 12-10-05, 12:02 AM   #11
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Voted For: Nick Fletcher

Daubs-Your verse was ok, i expected a higher level of intensity coming from you. You had some good concepts for punches but i feel some didnt work. you had good personals/wordplay.

fave. lines

''used to be dope, now your a joke..you cant spit sick
season, its like RV's winter..nobody wants to picnic''

some good wordplay and punch.
you started off strong, but wasnt really consistant wit ya shit man
overall 7/10 good verse.


Nick Fletcher-Bravo man, your verse was good.You held my attention wit some nice punches/wordplay. you had some nice concepts that didnt pull through but had a higher intensity than ur oponnent

Fave lines.

''But fa’real, kid you’ve elevated maybe you’ll win the next fight
And I hear its been a long time coming.…no wait, that’s your sex life!!''

had me actually laughing man...good shit
overall you had a nice strong piece, ive seen better from you..but overall this did the job
overall 8/10

v/Nick fletcher..

rtf wit some feed on my O/M in sig.
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