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Old 07-19-10, 04:20 PM   #991
whitegold
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J-360 u really need to do a one eighty
ur rhymes are as appealing as fucking an 80 year old lady
u need to pick up ur flow, pick up ur rhythm and finish with better punchlines
wait are we still talking rap? or are we talking last night
Don't fight, cuz what ur saying couldn't be less controlled
A punchline from me is more than just a line, it leaves u outcold
I'm back on the site with a purpose my name is whitegold
Ur shit is a bluff of a rhyme, i re-raised ur bet, u fold
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