Induelz - Your verse was on point for the most part. I enjoyed the word choice and the structure with the words that coincide within was done pretty well. It was good that you posted your verse 1st.

Dominating-DT - Structure was a bit odd, but the word selection was done good as well. When I began to read your verse, I thought some of the lines were okay...


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