this woz really gud actually you had sum quite basic stuff in there aswell but it was still pretty decent. the third verse woz ur best easily

You not in the top 50, maybe the best of last
Yall trash, too busy gettin ya rectum smashed
For cash, you can bet that i serve it well
Yall lil worms prolly go to jail, squirm and tell
Maybe you will learn the smell, when i burn the L's
Im movin sick, like City got germs to sell

^^that part woz mad hot

yer you had a nice flow wit this and decent wordplay. 8/10

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