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Old 01-18-07, 10:48 PM   #2
GREVISS
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you need two links, heres a piece of mine rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239072

its not bad for a quick key, you managed to cover a lot,
but i think that it was a little random, and it sort of had
a poetry feel to it...not sayin it is...but it felt better just
talkin the script instead of tryin to put a beat to it, i think
more consistant internals would be cool, cos most of the
was end rhyme...but still its ight for a quick key and i look
forward to reading a more concentrated drop from you...
stay up fam...and dont forget to get your links...peace