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Old 01-26-07, 10:54 AM   #5
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
Posts: 7,487
From: East Coast
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Son, your not gonna win...you got better Stakes in Lotto.
Your Structures so Totaled...
Insurance Companies are still asking for the Make and Model.
LMAO^
I Don'tKnowYou, Don'tLikeYou, You Milky bitch your spoiled.
If this Trailer Park Thug says his Hood is Poppin...He's just Low on Oil.

vs

watch, ill beat you so groggy ur ass'll need skull attached glasses
n' i'd tell you to hold your horses, but i think YOUR ALL JACK-ASSES!
so fuck this cunt, almost errybody here would make Rell bend and take it
cuz its wrong to air ur dirty laundry, but we dont want to see him naked


OKAY IM GONNA BREAK THIS DOWN A LITTLE FURTHER FOR DONTKNOWME'S SAKE, THOSE TWO I QUOTED WERE PRETTY GOOD PUNCHES, THE PROBLEM IS, YOUR VERSE WAS LITTERED WITH CLICHE PUNCHLINES, WHICH ARENT AS SOLID AS THEY USED TO BE.....REASON WHY? NEARLY ANYBODY WHO READS TEXT WILL TELL YOU THEY'VE SEEN THESE CONCEPTS ALL BEFORE
THE SPILLED MILK, SAME PAGE, HOLD YOUR HORSES AND DIRTY LAUNDRY ONE AT LEAST, YOU GOTTA MAKE YOUR VERSE MORE PERSONAL TOWARDS HIM AS A TEXTCEE, AND MIX IT UP A BIT MORE, PEOPLE LIKE SPITACULAR OVER AT RB HAVE RENDERED CLICHES UNDOABLE BY OVERDOING IT FOR YEARS, SO ITS NOT ALL YOUR FAULT LMAO
SO RELL YOU CAME PRETTY RUSTY OR YOU JUST DIDNT CARE, IVE DEF SEEN YOU COME HARDER BUT I WONT HOLD IT AGAINST YOU AS YOU'VE JUST SIGNED BACK IN

GOOD SHIT BOTH, DONTKNOWME IM INTERESTED TO SEE WHAT YOU POST NEXT WEEK CUZ YOUR AN ALIAS I CAN TELL BUT THIS WEEK SO RELL CAME BETTER OVERAL AND FRESHER CONCEPT WISE
V/ SO RELL
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