cool good looks, I could redo the hook but fuck it if i got their whole click name wrong lol. even better. yea idk if ya caught what i was tryin to do maybe it went over peoples heads or i should of explained it better. First verse was off topic like why am I talkin about how I was raised...then halfway in the 2nd i spoke on how the moral of that story i told in the first verse was to say i wasnt raised a bitch like him...thus Bridging the two verses together or bridging the rap... maybe im reachin lol

oh and i wanted to bleep out that intro..No offense JAY! lol hes cool peoples to talk to online and shit...just why u in a click thats wack..get out dude! lol