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Old 02-23-09, 08:47 PM   #5
Civil.
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i couldnt drop man, everyones been aware of my computer problems
this week. so i'm sorry about this.

anyways, i thought your intro was cool..when i was listening to it. i was like
damn this shits gon be hott....but overall i just thought it was ok. You had good
wordplay and ya rhyme scheme wasnt bad. But you fell off on the beat @ times.
Sounded kind of choppy. overalll work on hittin the beat more. As far as club banger
i dont really think this hit that topic well. but not bad man. will leave this open for feed
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