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Old 05-19-09, 10:44 PM   #12
Jay Rose
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this thatt vybe beat right? why doesnt anyone else take the time to take it out the beat??

sam comin hard...i feel i heard parts of this verse before.....i aint talked to that muh fucker in a while...

hook lacks....needs more ambiance....reverb? echo? make the hook EPIC not just coo

second guy needs to be turned up fa real just cuz the way he anunciates his words... needs to be louder to understand....man you missed out on some dope production shit yall coulda done...

shoulda punched the middle of the hook....lazy muh fucker, it takes away from it
nice verse....needs more flavor....the beat drop was dope tho....cool shit...
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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