ok this is my first drop on here...and my first audio drop in about 4 months...

be honest, but dont comment on the quality...this is the unmastered version

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/a2zmusic.htm

song is called "? rough & low"

if you really feel like breaking it down do it like this

1. flow
2. delivery
3. lyrics
4. hook
5. anything else right/wrong
6. overall