a wonderful choice end..will sand be entering as well

overall you both showed your talent for sure...vocabulary
imagery..all that good stuff...enjoyable to read as well...
these will all be tough ones for the judges but they're
all gonna come correct whenever the decisions are
finally made for these battles...skill representations...
hard to actually call these battles but they're
great to read...like the rhetorical insights forum
that nobody ever goes to...poet scripts is the best forum...

both of you..well done