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Old 07-06-03, 03:57 AM   #7
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WHAT! BLACK NO SHOWED!? AWWWWWWWWW thats fuckin wack! oh well

Anyway, did I call that shit or WUT!? Ok, now that I proved my point from the beef thread , lets get a real vote...

Gonzo: You didn't use an Eminem beat! Congrats to you! I'm glad that someone thought that you stayed on flow the whole time cus it sounded to me like you were strugglin a lil at some points. And I don't remember good multis either...? O well. Anyway, you had some good personals on blacklisted but djx has so much more on him you coulda said. your flow was so so. Your wordplay was ok... not really finals material tho. I'd expect to see better. Also, you punched in quite a bit. It was very noticable because sometimes you did it in odd places. You also had a couple played ideas in there... ex. the holiday inn line.

Ok, DJX...
By far the best quality. I didnt like how you seperated the verses. WAY TOO MUCH TALKIN... NOT NEARLY ENOUGH FLOWIN... 16 bars each? Thats ok but you had 7 minutes to spit. your wordplay was better than martinelli's. Without the talkin and all the other bullshit in the middle.... overall you had a decent verse. I was actually feelin it a lil bit. And thats sayin a lot cus i fuckin hate you sike. And I'm ignoring the fact that you and crook both had the No L line and the deck of cards line. Yall write your shit together? lol

aight, last but... well, maybe least (we'll see) Nojeel... NOT NOEL DUMMIES!...
You really need to work on ya delivery. You had some original ideas here but I couldn't really feel it. I wasnt feelin ya skeez. You and crook both have the same mediocre flow. Your originality seemed to fall off when you tried to hit hard with a punch... u called black a dummy and a liar... thats not creative at all. You shoulda combined your wordplay and your punches.... you probably would have taken this.

On that note...

MY VOTE
1. DJX - Overall punches, flow, and quality
2. Martinelli - Better punches than Nojeel
3. Nojeel - Nice try. Maybe next time
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