makaveli trained :

This dude reps SC n wonders y ppl say tha souf iz wak
Even Majic Johnson refused 2 purchase ya A-Tracks
^^wack 3/10
Im lethal wit verbs, wont hesitate ta give this dude a beating
Its 2 bad that ya Ghost-writers went out Trick-or-Treating
^^lmao dope 8/10
U’d think I hate Art tha way I damage ya Frame
Start bitin raps, cuz I cant Picture u ill, all I c iz Poor-Traits
^^dope fucking meta amazing lol 9/10
Ya Shoulderz iz Cracked, now im leavin ya Head on ya Back
Ur Under fire so how u gone take Over tha match
^^ehh wack and played 3/10
Ur Underarms like Deodorant, u aint potent, jus ass
Like havin Sex n tha Dumpster, this kids Fuking Trash
^^lol dope meta weak closer 5/10

overall : 28/50 (56%)

Schema:

your fucked just resign...no punch in ya lines...
oh and heres a new concept...multiple rhymes...
^^decent opener 5/10
want some advice? sound better...how you plan to sell records?
when you cant even figure out how to work the spell checker...
^^lmao dopest bar in this battle 10/10
WErD I SkEEtZ on DEEz HOEZ...wow hes street! the shit shows!..
looks like he typed his whole fuckin verse with his nose...
^^lmao dope consistent also 9/10
damn...he must have chilled with some thugs at one point...
cause judgin by his verse he wrote every punch at gunpoint...
^^lmao dope once again 8/10
whyd you even sign up for this tourney...shits silly...
youre out round one like a wildcard team against philly...
^^good meta weak closer 5/10

overall : 37/50 (74%)

vote: schema for obvious reasons

__________________

RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion