Flow:

your emotion was nice I was liking it a bit.......
depth went nicely with the drop aswell as the descriptions
not much originality but the other categories
made up for lacking it that............................

Magic: well you had vocab of course..............
sort of original but I have to say it was far too
short to have a chance with another verse....
sorry I understand you couldn't think of anything...

so...

vote: Flow

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